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Beanmimo 
"August review site"

Posted - 04/16/2007 :  11:28:48  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
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Originally posted by roger_thornhill

Okay, can somebody explain this rejection to me?

The film is Sorry, Wrong Number, a film about a middle-aged female invalid who is murdered by a killer hired by her husband. At end of the film, you get the celebrated line--"Sorry, wrong number"--spoken by the hired assassin to the husband who is calling home in hopes of aborting the murder plot.

My review: "Invalid number."

MERP judgment: rejected without explanation.





If your first attempt at reconsidersation doesn't stick, try

Invalid, number.

I have found that the comma seperation does work when using puns from different themes in a movie.
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boydegg 
"Creator of Grammarman comic."

Posted - 04/17/2007 :  18:16:17  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
If I was a MERP and I'd already seen the film, then I would have okayed that review right away.

It's valid and it's clever.

Boydegg

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