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Catuli 
"Loves Film and Fun"

Posted - 05/09/2007 :  20:55:05  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I'm sure all of you have written a review in the full knowledge that it was destined to be accepted and hailed to the hilt. Such was the case when I wrote a review for "Wolf In Sheep's Clothing." My review was "Wool-f?" I thought the "Wool" caught the appearance of a sheep and the added "f" forming "Wool-f" conveyed that it was really a Wolf. The question mark was applied to indicate the mystery and disguise element. Obviously the MERPS disagreed, declining the review with no cited reason.

I welcome whatever thoughts you may have as to why the review was declined. I promise to be an attentive listener.

Whippersnapper. 
"A fourword thinking guy."

Posted - 05/09/2007 :  21:30:19  Show Profile  Reply with Quote



This is how it should be done.



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Whippersnapper. 
"A fourword thinking guy."

Posted - 05/09/2007 :  21:44:01  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Catuli

I'm sure all of you have written a review in the full knowledge that it was destined to be accepted and hailed to the hilt. Such was the case when I wrote a review for "Wolf In Sheep's Clothing." My review was "Wool-f?" I thought the "Wool" caught the appearance of a sheep and the added "f" forming "Wool-f" conveyed that it was really a Wolf. The question mark was applied to indicate the mystery and disguise element. Obviously the MERPS disagreed, declining the review with no cited reason.

I welcome whatever thoughts you may have as to why the review was declined. I promise to be an attentive listener.





OK, now seriously, there's nothing wrong with your review. Resubmit it. Just make sure it doesn't get more votes than my review, OK?

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Tori 
"I don't get it...."

Posted - 05/09/2007 :  22:08:22  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I love it. I'd resub.
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Sean 
"Necrosphenisciform anthropophagist."

Posted - 05/09/2007 :  23:15:13  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Looks fine to me. Try a resub.
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redPen 
"Because I said so!"

Posted - 05/09/2007 :  23:28:36  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I love it! I vote "resubmit" as well. In case it gets kicked back again, try reformatting it. Try:

Wool(f?)
Wo(o)l(f)?
Wool wolf


etc, etc.

I think your original is great. Unfortunately, I don't get to say "yea" or "nay," and sometimes, if a beloved review just can't get through, you have to "bastardize" it a bit to sneak it in.

Good luck!
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Catuli 
"Loves Film and Fun"

Posted - 05/09/2007 :  23:58:43  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Wow, thanks for the encouragement gang, I'll resubmit it and state that there's a groundswell of support, although I won't embarrass anyone by citing names. Don't worry Whipper, I only aspire to having the second best entry for that movie.

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Downtown 
"Welcome back, Billy Buck"

Posted - 05/10/2007 :  02:05:16  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Yeah, that's a headscratcher. Can't say I see a thing wrong with it.
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Sean 
"Necrosphenisciform anthropophagist."

Posted - 05/10/2007 :  02:16:03  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I even think it would be OK as "Woolf." What else could it mean?
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Sludge 
"Charlie Don't Serf!"

Posted - 05/10/2007 :  04:39:20  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Worth mentioning... when you resub, explain it.

edit - nicely done, voted for it.

Edited by - Sludge on 05/10/2007 04:49:49
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BaftaBaby 
"Always entranced by cinema."

Posted - 05/10/2007 :  07:53:55  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Sludge

Worth mentioning... when you resub, explain it.

edit - nicely done, voted for it.




Me too!! It's grrrrrr-eat!

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Demisemicenturian 
"Four ever European"

Posted - 05/10/2007 :  09:06:51  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Se�n

I even think it would be OK as "Woolf."

Yup, this is the best form. It's really frustrating when people hit on a good pun and mess it up by adding needless punctuation or words. (The only problem with this is that it could refer to Virginia Woolf.)

This didn't need to be a new thread, though. Why couldn't the query be included in one of the many previous ones?

Edited by - Demisemicenturian on 05/10/2007 09:08:14
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Sean 
"Necrosphenisciform anthropophagist."

Posted - 05/10/2007 :  09:51:17  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Salopian

quote:
Originally posted by Se�n

I even think it would be OK as "Woolf."

Yup, this is the best form. It's really frustrating when people hit on a good pun and mess it up by adding needless punctuation or words. (The only problem with this is that it could refer to Virginia Woolf.)
Since the loosening up of the generic rule that shouldn't be a problem.
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Catuli 
"Loves Film and Fun"

Posted - 05/10/2007 :  13:24:57  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
"Wool-f?" just got approved. I almost feel guilty, like a spoiled brat who got rewarded after throwing a tantrum. The key word in that previous sentence is "almost." Thanks for you feedback all.

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Sludge 
"Charlie Don't Serf!"

Posted - 05/10/2007 :  18:54:20  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
We've seen (and, I should say, thrown) far greater tantrums for far worse reviews.
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TitanPa 
"Here four more"

Posted - 05/10/2007 :  20:00:12  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Love it! good job.
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