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rockfsh 
"Laugh, Love, Cheer"
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 Posted - 12/01/2008 : 15:31:34
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Originally posted by Salopian
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Originally posted by r9ckfsh
Burn After Reading spoilers
I don't get the -ad rhyme one. Is the first one describing the second (which I don't think is accurate) or are they separate people with the verb in an odd place?
The second. Harry Pfarrer is the cad. |
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Demisemicenturian 
"Four ever European"
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Posted - 12/02/2008 : 01:41:38
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Originally posted by r9ckfsh
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Originally posted by Salopian
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Originally posted by r9ckfsh
Burn After Reading spoilers
I don't get the -ad rhyme one. Is the first one describing the second (which I don't think is accurate) or are they separate people with the verb in an odd place?
The second.
O.K., at least it makes sense, so I've voted for it now. However, I'd suggest giving it a normal word order. Maybe you wanted to have the c and h either side of the ch, but I think it's just as satisfying to have the order c, h, ch as if the ch is the product of the preceding elements. |
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Sean's FYCTH #461
