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Larry 
"Larry's time / sat merrily"
Posted - 03/27/2011 :  13:19:04  Show Profile  Reply with Quote

v-i-e-w-t-e-d
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randall 
"I like to watch."
Posted - 03/27/2011 :  14:13:31  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
V&V
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clay 
"Viewer discretion is revised."
Posted - 03/27/2011 :  16:44:37  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Observe Theodore.
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Demisemicenturian 
"Four ever European"
Posted - 03/27/2011 :  18:01:40  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Stomp the Yard is about stepping.

You Kill Me is about a hitman of Polish origins.

One can see a lot of London from the Eye.

Wally Mars makes the switch in a moment of drunkenness.
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demonic 
"Cinemaniac"
Posted - 03/27/2011 :  20:20:25  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
VV!

By the way... my "Taking Sides" review is good - it's even got three meanings. No votes? What's up with you lot?

Let's go through it -

A Major holds the investigation.
"A Major" is a musical key.
The investigation is into a musician.
He's a conductor.
The investigation is conducte...

oh forget it.
Edited by - demonic on 03/27/2011 20:25:19
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rabid kazook 
"Pushing the antelope"
Posted - 03/27/2011 :  21:16:51  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by demonic

VV!

By the way... my "Taking Sides" review is good - it's even got three meanings. No votes? What's up with you lot?

Let's go through it -

A Major holds the investigation.
"A Major" is a musical key.
The investigation is into a musician.
He's a conductor.
The investigation is conducte...

oh forget it.


Maybe something more simple like "Conducts, investigation." would be better.

Anyhows Vv
Sludge, Matt, all filled can't vote, same old same old.
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demonic 
"Cinemaniac"
Posted - 03/27/2011 :  21:27:25  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Thanks Zooks. Don't see how simplifying it makes it better... it doesn't make it clearer or even as much sense as my way. Never mind. Really loved your "Skeleton Key" review.
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rabid kazook 
"Pushing the antelope"
Posted - 03/27/2011 :  21:38:21  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Oh man I didn't read the whole post through, I just noticed words 'conductor' and 'investigation', and went loud mouth.


Thanks for the review hail.
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BaftaBaby 
"Always entranced by cinema."
Posted - 03/27/2011 :  22:58:46  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
vv
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Demisemicenturian 
"Four ever European"
Posted - 03/28/2011 :  00:31:25  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by demonic

By the way... my "Taking Sides" review is good - it's even got three meanings. No votes? What's up with you lot?

Make it a lower-case m and it'll get my vote. Well, you did ask.
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[matt] 
"Cinemattic."
Posted - 03/28/2011 :  00:55:26  Show Profile  Reply with Quote

VV

quote:
Originally posted by demonic

By the way... my "Taking Sides" review is good - it's even got three meanings. No votes? What's up with you lot?

Got a vote from me. No idea why that's so under-voted.

quote:
Originally posted by rabid kazook

Sludge, Matt, all filled can't vote, same old same old.

Sorry for the lack of new ones to vote on!
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randall 
"I like to watch."
Posted - 03/28/2011 :  00:56:27  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Cracky: When you write under your avatar

Re: any comment in this post on English usage...

don't you mean thread? Or maybe, "on this post." Otherwise you're only giving instructions to yourself. [Come to think of it, that's probably a ripping good idea!] I'm only sub-editing here for clarity.
Edited by - randall on 03/28/2011 01:16:31
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demonic 
"Cinemaniac"
Posted - 03/28/2011 :  01:57:41  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Cracovian

quote:
Originally posted by demonic

By the way... my "Taking Sides" review is good - it's even got three meanings. No votes? What's up with you lot?

Make it a lower-case m and it'll get my vote. Well, you did ask.




Well yes, that's exactly why I asked for feedback. You use a capital to signify a title or rank. Without it the review would just be "a major investigation", rather than one markedly held by a Major.
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demonic 
"Cinemaniac"
Posted - 03/28/2011 :  01:59:16  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by [matt]
Got a vote from me. No idea why that's so under-voted.

Thank you [matt] - I could only hit one of yours... that'd be the one I hadn't already.
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Demisemicenturian 
"Four ever European"
Posted - 03/28/2011 :  10:17:13  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by randall

Cracky: When you write under your avatar

Re: any comment in this post on English usage...

don't you mean thread? Or maybe, "on this post." Otherwise you're only giving instructions to yourself. [Come to think of it, that's probably a ripping good idea!] I'm only sub-editing here for clarity.

Thanks for your input, but no, the wording is exactly as I intended, as always; it doesn't give instructions to myself at all.
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